literature

The perfect Girl

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Literature Text

We the outcasts Long for love
Something so pure and white as a dove
A feeling so deep, it cannot be shattered
Yeah thats what I think truely matters
Some one who we can hold and brag about to the friends at the bar,
Some one who knows exactly who we are.
we want all this and so much more, a girl like that is our perfect score.
*Editted Comment*
Ok for the record, when I say such a girl is the perfect score I do not mean it in such a way that it would demean any female.
Some of you may be wondering "Why the hell are you writing this message?" Well to be honest some one had to be a douche bag and tell me that what I was saying was not right.
When I say "The Perfect Score." I mean that would be the girl for me nothing more nothing less. If any of you got the idea that I was a man whore or I was demeaning females please tell me and I will correct this problem. Hopefully no one got this idea and it was limited to this one person.

I love you all and thanks for the views.
(No names will be mentioned for those of you who would chew this person out)

*Old Comment*
Ok, guys who feel like you are outcasts you know what im sayin and if you dont then your not an outcast and need to rethink your life.

Love is so much more than looks alone.
Β© 2008 - 2024 Crisnaga
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sarra-paladin's avatar
thats a good poem i like it